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Nathalie
lives in the Vertiglis House, where she works in the apothecary to pay off the debt she owes to the house. She lives with her adopted father, an elderly crow who taught her everything about medicine, herbs, poisons, and killing.
Kidnap
Here’s a smoother version with better grammar, pacing, and a more novel-like flow while keeping your original idea and tone.
Demon school
The Netherworld is a massive supernatural world where demons, magical creatures, spirits, and other strange beings live. It looks dangerous from a human perspective, but to demons, it is simply home.
Demon school
The Netherworld is a massive supernatural world where demons, magical creatures, spirits, and other strange beings live. It looks dangerous from a human perspective, but to demons, it is simply home.
My man
OH, this is basically “I inherited a mansion and accidentally inherited a Russian mafia fiancé.” 😭
Cortizone
Three college-educated friends die in their original world and reincarnate as yokai in a supernatural world inspired by Japanese folklore, where gods, spirits, demons, and humans coexist under a strict hierarchy shaped by power, species, wealth, and ancient laws. Although they appear to be ordinary yokai, the three secretly retain their memories, education, and knowledge from their former lives, never revealing their original identities or true names, because their souls remain bound to the names they carried before death. Zemi, a nine-tailed kitsune, is beautiful, intelligent, vain, and fond of luxury, pleasure, and manipulating social situations; the oni is a deadly beautiful strategist whose immense strength and fierce loyalty make her dangerous to anyone who threatens her friends; and the tengu is a brilliant, scientifically minded woman who has chosen to remain silent around everyone except her two closest friends. In this world, the principles of science that the tengu once studied correspond to ancient divine runes, allowing her to create powerful supernatural effects by understanding their underlying logic, even when she does not fully understand their divine origins. After arriving in this unfamiliar world, the three find work at an elite courtesan establishment in a wealthy, beautiful district whose glittering surface conceals exploitation, dangerous contracts, discrimination, and political corruption. Through their unusual talents, the calculating madam’s business strategies, and their carefully controlled public appearances, they rise from low-ranking workers to become known as the establishment’s Three Jewels: the Double Pearl, the Silent Strength, and the Unheard Jewel. They live together in a secluded, dilapidated house across the street, where they continue investigating their new powers and protecting one another while hiding their past lives. Their growing fame attracts the attention of three powerful gods: the Sea God, who becomes hopelessly captivated by Zemi; the Tiger God, who delights in challenging the oni and repeatedly losing to her; and the mysterious God of the Mountains and the Wind, who becomes intrigued by the tengu’s extraordinary feather fan and its ancient divine signature. As the girls navigate their new careers, strange supernatural occurrences, divine courtship, political schemes, and the secrets surrounding their reincarnation, their close friendship and dark humor remain their greatest sources of comfort in a world where beauty can become a commodity, knowledge can be dangerous, true names can grant power over a soul, and even the gods may be far more frightening than they first appear.
Cortizone
Three college-educated friends die in their original world and reincarnate as yokai in a supernatural world inspired by Japanese folklore, where gods, spirits, demons, and humans coexist under a strict hierarchy shaped by power, species, wealth, and ancient laws. Although they appear to be ordinary yokai, the three secretly retain their memories, education, and knowledge from their former lives, never revealing their original identities or true names, because their souls remain bound to the names they carried before death. Zemi, a nine-tailed kitsune, is beautiful, intelligent, vain, and fond of luxury, pleasure, and manipulating social situations; the oni is a deadly beautiful strategist whose immense strength and fierce loyalty make her dangerous to anyone who threatens her friends; and the tengu is a brilliant, scientifically minded woman who has chosen to remain silent around everyone except her two closest friends. In this world, the principles of science that the tengu once studied correspond to ancient divine runes, allowing her to create powerful supernatural effects by understanding their underlying logic, even when she does not fully understand their divine origins. After arriving in this unfamiliar world, the three find work at an elite courtesan establishment in a wealthy, beautiful district whose glittering surface conceals exploitation, dangerous contracts, discrimination, and political corruption. Through their unusual talents, the calculating madam’s business strategies, and their carefully controlled public appearances, they rise from low-ranking workers to become known as the establishment’s Three Jewels: the Double Pearl, the Silent Strength, and the Unheard Jewel. They live together in a secluded, dilapidated house across the street, where they continue investigating their new powers and protecting one another while hiding their past lives. Their growing fame attracts the attention of three powerful gods: the Sea God, who becomes hopelessly captivated by Zemi; the Tiger God, who delights in challenging the oni and repeatedly losing to her; and the mysterious God of the Mountains and the Wind, who becomes intrigued by the tengu’s extraordinary feather fan and its ancient divine signature. As the girls navigate their new careers, strange supernatural occurrences, divine courtship, political schemes, and the secrets surrounding their reincarnation, their close friendship and dark humor remain their greatest sources of comfort in a world where beauty can become a commodity, knowledge can be dangerous, true names can grant power over a soul, and even the gods may be far more frightening than they first appear.
First born
Of course — here’s the shorter version with the main story beats:
Family house
Of course—here’s a tighter version while keeping the main drama and comedy:
CEO
Were you crazy enough to get married to some random person with any reason for their marriage for it to be that the person would monthly pay you for being his fake wife and you would have to go to some hotels every other month or so to make it seem to the public that you’re technically married, but you didn’t have to touch or anything, and there was a prenup and everything but you were legally married. What do you sign up for something like that because you did you were a normal girl Latina had a lot of family back in your own country you helped you were pretty good. You had a lot of a little bit of money you helped wherever you could, but you had one very horrible habit. You couldn’t stop yourself from buying stuff, but of course you weren’t crazy about it. You would only buy what was necessary in your eyes but every time you saw that you had a little bit too much of something you would of course send it back to your country to your grandparents parents or whatever whoever wanted it so when you signed up for this prenup, you were OK with it you were a pretty normal person. You were secretary for many high and places and stores but everywhere you seem to go the prices and the stocks would go up in the company so you were pretty well known for being one of the best secretaries anyone could have and you were married or it said your legal documents to some random man you didn’t even know who he was what happened was that one late afternoon you got this message saying blah blah high in person wanted to get married that it wasn’t because he wanted it was because his family wanted him to and blah blah and you were like oh free money so you accepted it was just some signing of documents. You didn’t even meet the guy like you didn’t care.
CEO
Were you crazy enough to get married to some random person with any reason for their marriage for it to be that the person would monthly pay you for being his fake wife and you would have to go to some hotels every other month or so to make it seem to the public that you’re technically married, but you didn’t have to touch or anything, and there was a prenup and everything but you were legally married. What do you sign up for something like that because you did you were a normal girl Latina had a lot of family back in your own country you helped you were pretty good. You had a lot of a little bit of money you helped wherever you could, but you had one very horrible habit. You couldn’t stop yourself from buying stuff, but of course you weren’t crazy about it. You would only buy what was necessary in your eyes but every time you saw that you had a little bit too much of something you would of course send it back to your country to your grandparents parents or whatever whoever wanted it so when you signed up for this prenup, you were OK with it you were a pretty normal person. You were secretary for many high and places and stores but everywhere you seem to go the prices and the stocks would go up in the company so you were pretty well known for being one of the best secretaries anyone could have and you were married or it said your legal documents to some random man you didn’t even know who he was what happened was that one late afternoon you got this message saying blah blah high in person wanted to get married that it wasn’t because he wanted it was because his family wanted him to and blah blah and you were like oh free money so you accepted it was just some signing of documents. You didn’t even meet the guy like you didn’t care.